Quarter 3 Reflection

Third quarter, what can I say, I am glad that I saw a lot of improvement with my writing. I was surprised when I got my last two papers back, I didn't expect to do that well. I guess all the extra practice and writing helped me out. I have to say that compared to my third quarter papers, my first and second quarter papers were bad. I think the reason why is because I actually followed every step. I took my time to figure out my thesis, and organize my outline so I knew exactly what to write when I actually wrote my essay. I also found that Ms. Ahearn's comments on my essays helped me fix some glitches I needed to work on. It's true, Practice makes perfect. I think that I'm pretty confident in my writing, the only thing I will work on will be to have a stronger voice when I am writing, that still isn't perfected all the way.

Out of the four books we have read in the past quarter my favorite was Wuthering Heights. I enjoyed that book so much. I think it was because we're used to seeing and reading of the perfect romances and love stories, and Wuthering Heights was the exact opposite. It was dark, and twisted, nothing you would normally expect which made it good.

Wuthering Heights & Their Eyes Were Watching God Comparison Paper

Comparison Paper:

Wuthering Heights & Their Eyes Were Watching God

Love is only accomplished when a strong willed person is truly positive that they are with the right person, both Wuthering Heights and Their Eyes Were Watching God come to that conclusion. In both the novels the theme that love is better far from the opinion of society is accomplished by Catherine Earnshaw and Janie Crawford’s portrayal of the difference between a strong willed woman, and a weak willed woman. Wuthering Heights and Their Eyes Were Watching God’s characters Catherine Earnshaw and Janie Crawford experience the deceiving views on love by society, but they experience it differently, because of their difference in character. Where Catherine wasn’t able to be with the one she truly loved, Janie overcame society’s views and was able to be with the one she loved.

Every love story has a beginning. In the beginning of Wuthering Heights Catherine is in love with Heathcliff, but a visit to the Linton House changes her view on with whom she should be with. Catherine’s character starts off knowing what love is, and knowing that Heathcliff is it, but later denies him because she wants to comply with society. In the book there is a scene where you clearly learn that Catherine is well aware of her feelings toward Heathcliff and her feelings toward good social status, (Linton). She is speaking with Nelly and confesses to her that she loves Heathcliff, but she will never amount to anything if she lives how Heathcliff lives, and therefore she chooses Linton. With this we begin to see that the theme that love is better far from society’s opinion is beginning to unroll in Catherine’s life. Her passionate love for Heathcliff is paused so that she can have a “good” life according to society, which later brings her unhappiness. Bronte begins to show how weak willed Catherine is and how she is easily persuaded to give up what she loves.

Janie’s love story begins differently. Janie begins not knowing what love felt like. She was led to believe that love came after you married. She soon found out that this wasn’t true. Even though Janie did not feel the same passionate love for someone, like Catherine did, she longed for it and thought she could achieve it the way society did; marrying someone for safety, not love. Her first husband was enough to show Janie that the view her society had on love was not what she wanted for her life. In the novel we can see when Janie comes to this conclusion because she goes to ask her grandmother, “why don’t I love him yet?” Her love toward him couldn’t grow but she was called foolish because she was married and stable with man that could protect her. Unlike Catherine, Janie learned she couldn’t marry someone for stability after she was forced into society’s love story. Hurston begins to reveal Janie’s strong will to obtain what she wants, true love.

Even though Catherine was in love with Heathcliff, she married Linton because of society’s expectations. She lived her life along his side never knowing how it could’ve been if she would have chosen differently. She is never truly happy with Linton and it shows once Heathcliff returns from his long absence from Wuthering Heights. Catherine has always been a “wishy-washy” character, (she goes back and forth, knowing what she wants, but too afraid to take it), and it hinders her well-being. When Heathcliff was gone, she was “okay” with Linton, but once Heathcliff came back, all the passion that the two could not deny each returned, but since society didn’t see it right that she should be with him, she played with the emotions of both men because she could not live without one or the other. This shows how Bronte feels about how strong a woman’s character should be. Without having a strong will, a woman can easily be persuaded into something she does not agree with because she is afraid of disapproval.

Hurston on the other hand wanted to prove that a woman can have a strong will and pursue what she knows she deserves. Janie had a total of three marriages, which she had in pursuit of what she wanted to experience, love. Her first two marriages failed; both because they were social marriages (done in pursuit of social happiness instead of true love). Her last one, with Tea Cake, finally proved to Janie that love was possible, and it could be found in anyone, it was just a matter of finding that one. Hurston contradicted what Bronte portrayed with Catherine in Wuthering Heights with Janie in Their Eyes Were Watching God. Women who are strong willed like Janie go in pursuit of what they want, not what society wants, and achieve happiness, unlike Catherine whose weak willed character made her lose her love, which caused her to lose her life.

The way both novels end are different, but they both add to the theme that love is only accomplished when you follow your heart. Catherine’s choice to marry Linton over Heathcliff brings misfortune not just upon her, but upon everyone around her. Catherine suffers internally because she longs for the one she loves, but her family suffers Heathcliff’s wrath which is brought about because of Catherine’s decision. Catherine is never truly happy, she got to experience what love felt like in the beginning, but traded it off for something that isn’t so important. Bronte’s decision to leave Catherine unhappy helps engrave the theme that love should be accomplished according to a person’s feelings as opposed to a person’s want for social stability and approval. There would be no point in her novel if Bronte allowed Catherine to live, “happily ever after,” the theme would be lost.

Janie starts off not knowing what love is, but she has a desire to find out. It’s sometimes hard to search for something when you don’t know exactly what you’re searching for. Janie knew that there was something more to love than just safety and stability, unlike Catherine, who got the opportunity to know love and experience it but still chose to live by society’s rule. When Janie finds Tea Cake, she begins to realize that she was right, and that she had found someone who made her happy, someone who completed her. Hurston wanted to show that women shouldn’t have to settle for less because they don’t know what they should have. Hurston also wanted to prove that without a strong will, a woman will find it hard to do things because they want to, not because they have to.

Bronte and Hurston both wanted to prove that love was something free from society’s opinion and all about the way a person felt. Even though they used completely different characters to portray it, their point is understood both ways. Bronte’s romantic love story with a weak willed female character, and a terrible twist that none of the characters could escape brings the reader to see what terrible, twisted things may happen because of a weak willed woman’s decision to ignore her love. Hurston’s way of creating three different situations a woman might encounter in search for love helps us embrace the theme that a strong willed woman does not take society’s easy way out, she finds it better to keep going and follow her heart. Even though Catherine and Janie’s experience with love were different from the beginning to the end of the novels, the reader comes to the same conclusion in the end, being weak and settling for society’s view on love causes unhappiness in not just women, but in any person in search of true love.

Their Eyes Were Watching God Paper

Their Eyes Were Watching God Essay

Have you ever heard the expression, “He’s probably compensating for something?” Well that phrase describes Jody perfectly. Jody’s relationship with Janie shows that Jody is threatened by Janie and he covers that fear of being powerless with his controlling attitude. This contributes to Hurston overall meaning that women are not powerless without a man.

When Janie’s hair is in one braid, it is described as you would describe a male’s organ, and her breast described as pugnacious. Even Janie’s features give her the power she has. Jody on the other hand has to buy everyone and command everyone to get a sense of power and fulfillment. Near the end of Jody and Janie’s relationship there is a confrontation, by this time Janie is tired of putting up with Jody’s want for power and does not let Jody put her down anymore. Janie insults Jody, “Humph! Talkin’ ‘bout me lookin’ old! When you pull down yo’ britches, you look lak de change uh life.” It is a big contrast between the two characters. Janie’s braid has more resemblance to a male organ than Jody’s male organ. This irony oooohhh. good insightful analysis! intensifies the idea that Janie has a natural power to her, unlike Jody who sees power as necessary to fulfill his life. Hurston used this to prove that even though men sometimes believe they hold the reins in a relationship, women can come out and take the reins just as well as men.

Throughout the book, Janie is described having a power that is intimidating to men, including Jody. Even though Janie’s first husband took it well, Jody was not going to sit and have Janie take control of him. Jody, to begin with owns a feminine name, and fakes power. For example, Jody commands Janie to keep her hair up around the shop, because “she was there for only him to look at” but later on in that same paragraph Hurston writes “but he couldn’t say that. It wasn’t in him.” Even though Jody could stand up and tell Janie that she had to pull her hair up, he could not work up the “power” to tell Janie why. Hurston uses this “power” in Jody to point out that some men cannot handle having strong, powerful women because they become self-conscious and begin to demand a power that they don’t necessarily have.

When I think of power I imagine it to be a strong characteristic that shouldn’t be looked for and shouldn’t be lost because of a misfortune. Jody gained “power”, and as easily as you obtain something, you can lose it. When Jody became sick his sense of “power” began to deteriorate. He began to lose the idea that he should gain all the power in the world in order to be happy. In the end, Jody was weak, “A deep sob came out of Jody’s weak frame. [..] Then it rose high like pulling in a trombone.” You can see that Jody who had no real power easily broke down when he took into account his sickness. Janie is a different story. In the beginning of the book when she is walking back to her house after the incident with Tea Cake she walks without showing any shame, without showing any emotion that might make her seem weak. Janie’s real power helps her get through what happens to Tea Cake and herself.

Jody and Janie were a couple that showed that power was within a person, and not given with control over many people and land. It also showed that women are capable of being more powerful than men and that they can stand for themselves and be strong. Hurston understood that showing that women were capable of power within themselves was important. Janie was characterized as a strong woman with a mind of her own. Hurston pointed out that even when put under the “power” of a man who believed she should obey him, she still outshone him and overcame it.

Quarter 2 Reflection

Quarter 2 is finally over and I believe I have good work to show for it. Of course it did get a little harder, but that’s how you learn. I was glad to see that I improved in my writing. But still a little uneasy because I don’t think I am where I’m supposed to be. Hopefully third quarter bring that security.

We did a lot of reading this quarter and lucky us, all the books were good. Tartuffe by Moliere was extremely funny, which made it a lot easier to read. Othello was a tragedy, but I think that that’s what made the class interested in the play. We all had the same question, “Who was going to fall victim to Shakespeare’s deaths?” well by the end of the play we all knew, and I was upset because the ending was unfair, but I guess that’s why they call a tragedy right? The final book we read, Crime and Punishment by Dostoevsky was one of the best books I have ever read. I always wanted to read it; I just never had the chance. Once I finally got to dab into the mind that Dostoevsky had created in his book, I couldn’t stop reading, it was too good. My favorite book as you can already imagine was Crime and Punishment, and it’s going to be hard to top that this year; but then again we are reading Wuthering Heights third quarter, and that book was also good.

The only thing I have to complain about second quarter is that I don’t feel like I am where I should be. But I do know what it is I have to fix to get there. It’ll take a lot a work because I’m used to the way I write, but I’m hoping that we practice more doing third quarter so I can catch my mistakes and fix them early on.

Although I’m still not where I want to be, I believe that second quarter helped me climb a little higher to where I want to be. All I need to do is keep practicing and make sure I checking my work before I turn it in, so that I can finally get the grades I should be getting. Let’s say hello to a quarter =].

Othello Pancake Paper

Othello Paper

Trust, a good quality in a person until the person becomes too trusting of the other people around them. Throughout Othello, the main character Othello is viewed as a tragic Hero, but every tragic hero has his hamartia. Othello’s way of trusting easily caused him jealousy that made his obsession climb until he had nothing left to do but act on what he was led to believe. Othello’s trust in Iago’s word began a chain reaction that ultimately led to Othello’s downfall.
Othello is a character that seems to have it all, which means that there is someone who doesn’t have enough. Iago is one character that doesn’t have enough so he sets out to get what he wants. “My lord you know I love you.” (3.3.134). Othello was a good man, how could he believe that someone was out to get him? His good nature and his great position led him to believe that no one would dare hurt him, which increased his trust in everyone around him. Which is why the words above, which were given in the most deceitful was were taken in as true. By believe those few words Othello gave much power to Iago, and Iago’s plan to destroy Othello.
Now that Iago has planted the seed of doubt, he begins to care of what he has planted. How does he make sure that his seed is growing strong; by lying. “I speak not yet of proof [...]I would not have you free and noble nature, out of self-bounty, be abused.” (3.3.227-231). Othello’s trusting matter made it easy for Iago to enhance the doubt that he had already invested in Othello. Iago in the quote above stated that he had no solid proof, but advised Othello to watch both his wife and his ex-lieutenant to see for himself if something was wrong. Poor Othello believed everything Iago said to him, and everything that Iago showed him.
As humans, it is natural to feel a little jealous toward something that is ours. So when Othello hears from Iago that Othello’s wife Desdemona might be cheating on him, Othello goes mad with “the green-eyed monster.” You would think that Othello, being a great man of his country, would not be easily persuaded into the idea that his wife has failed him. But jealousy can cause a man to change his view on things instantly. “By the world, I think my wife be honest and think she is not…I’ll have some proof!” (3.3.438-441). Othello’s trust in Iago has given Iago the right to torment Othello; which is what the quote above shows, Othello’s confusion between what is true, and what his jealousy is leading him to believe.
Every chain reaction always has to end. Othello’s chain reaction started with the moment he began to trust Iago; continued with his built up jealousy, and will end with the murder of the one he loved driven on by his obsessed mind. “For I will make him tell the tale anew--.” “(Iago) Ply Desdemona well, and you are sure on ‘t…(Cassio) laughing. (Othello) Look how he laughs already!” (4.1.99-127). Othello is completely taken over by jealousy that his obsession on the subject begins to turn the slightest insignificant think like laughter into something that means so much more. Othello lets his obsession consume him until all he sees is his wife and his ex-lieutenant being deceitful together.
In the end Othello’s obsession causes him to kill his wife. He does not know what he has done until he strips himself of everything that has been thrust upon him and actually analyzes what he has done. “You told a lie, an odious damned lie! Upon my soul, a lie, a wicked lie!...” (5.2.216-218). Emelia was the one who helped Othello strip away all the things that plagued his mine. By the times that she confessed that Desdemona was the most sincere woman, it was too late, Othello had done the deed. Once Othello realized what he had done, without a hint of jealousy, or obsession, he didn’t what else to do but to mourn the death of his wife with his own death.
Othello was a good example for those who trust easily and are led quickly by things they see and don’t understand. The road to Othello’s downfall began with the simple belief that someone who was out to get him “loved him.” Later, this person, Iago, had the ability to give Othello a piece of information and have Othello view it in the incorrect way. If Othello stopped between these occurrences to think about what it was that he was actually hearing, and seeing, he would’ve figured out that there was no way that Desdemona and Cassio were going behind his back and doing deceitful things. But Othello was a man who worked on so much passion that he let it increase every bad feeling that he had, which led to the death of the most honest person in his life; Ironic isn’t it?

Blog #1: S&S Ch. 1

Reviewing Chapter One

Ordinary language does not say more and says it more intensely as poetic language does.
The uses of language:
Information: most common use of language, it helps us with the ordinary business of living.
Experience: this exists to bring us a sense and a perception of life, to widen and sharpen our contacts with existence.
Persuasion: is used in advertisements, sermons, and political speeches to convince audience to support a certain argument.

Looking for moral instruction and beauty may be limiting approaches because if you do what is morally correct to the world, and write about what the world think beauty is, you deny yourself the chance to find out what your personal opinion on those subjects are.

Distinctions between poetry and other imaginative literature are that poetry is the most condensed and concentrated form of literature.
Four dimensions of experience that poetry involves:
Metaphor: comparing two things with “like” or “as”
Irony: when you get something opposite of what’s expected
Sound repetition: Beginning letters, endings in words, create rhythm/pattern
Allusion: Mirrors ideas from different work of literature

“The Last Night that She Lived” portrays all the things exemplified in the chapter because the language isn’t dry, or scarce, the writing has more behind what’s read, and the poem causes feelings with the story.

Sound & Sense: Chapter 2

1.Review the 5 preliminary suggestions for reading poems.

•Read the Poem more than once.

•Keep a dictionary by you and use it.

•Read so as to hear the sounds of words in your mind.•Always pay careful attention to what the poem is saying.

•Practice reading poems aloud.

2. List step in paraphrasing, and create paraphrases of several poems, showing how paraphrase helps to clarify the theme.

•To paraphrase a poem means to restate it in different language, so as to make its prose sense as plain as possible. The paraphrase should contain all the ideas in the poem in such a way as to make them clear and to make the central, or theme, of the poem accessible.

3. Explain how identifying the speaker and the occasion of the poem show the dramatic quality of the poetry.

•Identifying the speaker and the occasion of the poem show dramatic quality of the poetry because the speaker and the occasion might reflect the poets life, while the speaker and the occasion may only be something fictional that the poet thought up.

4. Explore the concept of a "central purpose" of a poem."

•The concept of a central purpose of a poem would be to figure out what the poem was written for. Without knowing why the poem was written we don’t get the full effect of the poem.

5. Consider the difference between the means and the ends in determining a central purpose of a poem.

•The means of determining a central purpose of a poem would be determining what the poet was trying to say, and then the ends of it would be whether or not you agree with it or not.

6.Determine which ideas in this chapter are exemplified in the following poems.

•The poem There’s been a Death, in the Opposite House best exemplifies paraphrasing because it is simple to put it in your own words and figure out the meaning of the poem.